Phillipa Holland Poetry Award for 2024 winner Colleen Keating

I am honoured and excited to win the Phillipa Holland Poetry Award for 2024 for my poem Two Canticles It was announced in the Fellowship of Australian Writers  Eastwood/Hills Poetry Competition, Saturday afternoon 3rd August 2024  on a Zoom meeting to  avail us all  shortlisted candidates to come together from all over Australia.  Thank you to the judges and hard working organisers Carolyn Eldridge-Alfonzetti and Frances moon

I had two poems Shortlisted for the selection, Two Canticles and Ungraspable.

It was also exciting to have my second poem Highly Commended.

Results

Winner of the Phillipa Holland Poetry Award 2024   for the poem Two Canticles.  Colleen Keating

Highly commended in the Phillipa Holland Poetry Award 2024 for the poem Ungraspable  Colleen Keating

Annual Literary Competition Results 2024

AUGUST 3, 2024 / HILLSFAW

 

Eastwood/ Hills FAW has completed judging for our Annual Literary Competition. We are very pleased to congratulate the following 2024 Category Winners and place-getters.

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I feel my winning poem is appropriate for today August 2024 as it is a cry for peace , still a cry  over the hundreds of years from St Francis in the 12th century to Francis Webb who lived in the late 20th century dying in Sydney in 1973 and now I wrtie in 2024 and it is acknowledged with an award.

Last night my award became a reality when i heard from my poetry group Pennant Hills Poet   receiving congratulations even before I could find a list of the winners. Thank you to David and the group for their constant support and positive  edits of our work  each week.

Dear Friends
I have learnt some wonderful news; please excuse me piggy backing on earlier emails.
The results of the annual competitions convened by the Eastwood/Hills FAW have been announced. Our own Colleen has won First prize in the Philippa Holland Award (for poetry) with her poem “Two Canticles”. And Colleen had another poem Highly Commended as well.
Congratulations, Colleen!
Best wishes
David

Eastwood/Hills Fellowship of Australian Writers

Dear Colleen Keating,

I am pleased to announce that your entries ‘Two Canticles’ and ‘ungraspable’ have been shortlisted in the Poetry category of our literary competition.
The Presentation is scheduled to be held via Zoom on Saturday the 3rd of August, 2024 at 2.30pm.  Shortlisted entrants will need to have their entry/entries handy to read out should they be awarded First or Second Place.
The Zoom link will be emailed the day before the event.  Please let us know via return email if you are able or unable to attend.
Thank you for entering our competition.
Regards,
Carolyn Alfonzetti
Competition Secretary
Eastwood/Hills FAW

Ungraspable a poem by Colleen Keating

 

ungraspable

it happened with the turn of tide
on a shallow sandy shoal
now it had beached dry

hot air sharp as spears
summer sun
glistening on its silver grey skin

blue spots shimmered across its flank
as it flapped intermittently
like a large bird with a broken wing

our carefree stroll along the beach
stopped
here was a life and death matter

the world was silent
only the waves measuring time
like a tolling bell

a young stingray lay before us
like a sacrificial lamb
eyes open as if pleading

using our bucket we splashed
water over its fretting skin
like cooling a fever

until it was still
then we noticed the hook
embedded in its flesh

we got down on our knees
my grandson and i
as if to reassure this creature

there was a tenderness
confusion
a hole of helplessness

a lifesaver brought a spade –
i was sorry it could not be pushed back
to sigh one last time amidst the waves

later the piled up hill of sand
was still there
Is that where he is? my grandson asked

it was time to take his little hand
and walk to the edge of the ocean
listen to its rill whoose back and forth

see its gifts of shells and spinning stones
watch the gulls whirl in the thrill of life
feel the ungraspable cycle of give and take

by Colleen Keating

 

A Stingray story  with Mum, Grandma ,Edison and Darcy

(Written while we were holidaying at the Dolphin House)

It happened in the dark of night
on The Entrance beach
and in the morning
it made us all so sad.

It happened at high tide
and we found it as we were rambling
along the edge of the waves
playing happily with pieces of Neptunes Necklace

and looking for all sort of shells the high tide had left behind.
It was Mum and Grandma and us two boys Edison and Darcy.

We were jumping in the waves and running up on the sand
and then we saw it
a large grey and blue blob lying helplessly on the sand
it was a large greyish stingray
beached, left behind when the tide went out

 

It couldn’t breath air because it doesn’t have lungs.
It has gills like fish and breathes its air through the water
Mum thought she saw it take a last gulp.
It was too heavy to push back in the sea.
It lay there before us all .
It looked so beautiful in the sunlight.

It was grey with beautiful blue marking
and sad eyes and open gills.

We all patted it and were surprised at it soft sticky skin.
and remembered the Torpedo Rays in Octanauts.

We stood helplessly by, till a lifesaver came
He turned it over and it became an even sadder story

because it had a fishing hook embedded in its blobby flesh .

We felt so mad about people who don’t look after our sea because all the sea creatures are so endangered by plastics and pollution.

Back at home we looked up fun fact about Stingrays
and it was good to learn some interesting things.

 

Fun Facts about Stingrays

1 They are one of the beautiful creatures of the sea as they move along in the water. 

2 They have no bones in their body – their skeleton is made up of flexible cartilage (the bendy stuff that your ears and nose are made of

3 Baby stingray are hatched from eggs that are held within the body of the mother 

4 They use a super set of electric senses to search for food. Their eyes are on the top side of their body   and their mouth and gills are found underneath so in murky water this electromagnetic sense is especially useful for searching for prey.

5 they like to live by themselves  and only come together for breeding . 

6 They protect themselves with venomous spines or barbs in their tail

7 They feed on fish clams and shrimp

8 Sadly they are now a threatened species .Overfishing, habitat loss and climate change are the major threats 

 

Thank you Edison for allowing me to use your drawing in this story.